Flower In Snow Poem by ramesh rai

Flower In Snow

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I saw a flower
in the shrubs of snowy dust
the little young flower
winkling and smiling
in the lonely path
spreading her fragrance
and beauty; her reddish
lips getting more crimson
in the snowy dust
seeking love of stars
to hold her tightly
in his arms like steel
for realisation of warmth.

Wednesday, August 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 27 August 2014

A poem any poet would be proud of my friend.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 August 2014

A lovely poem. Ramesh Rai would have written it in a different meaning but I see a handsome child walking in a valley, surrounded by hills, covered with snow, ignorant of evils of terror, and the nature shining in the beauty of that child is requesting to protect this child with thunders of steel.

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Louis Rams 28 August 2014

the wanting of a true love to hold her tight and to be protected with all his might.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2014

Lovely poem. Little flower looking for warmth of love and care. Loved the beautiful imagery of words you used to paint the beautiful picture....

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Savita Tyagi 02 September 2014

Lovely poem. Image of little flower surrounded by snowy dust looking at star for protection is just so beautiful and full of tender emotions.

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Tadasha Tripathy 01 September 2014

Lovely write. I liked it much.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2014

Flower in the shrubs of snowy dust seeking love of stars. Beautiful image. Enjoyed the delightful poem.

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Louis Rams 28 August 2014

she looked for his warmth and loving care with whom her love she could share

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