Flowers.. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Flowers..

Rating: 5.0


IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON VALENTINE'S DAY,
AND FOR NOT SHOWING MY LOVE IN THAT SPECIAL WAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON MOTHERS DAY,
AND FOR NOT APPRECIATING WHAT YOU DO
FOR OUR CHILDREN NIGHT AND DAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON OUR ANNIVERSARY,
I NEVER MEANT TO HURT YOUR FEELINGS AND IM SORRY.

IM SO SORRY FOR HAVING TO GIVE YOU FLOWERS
ONLY ON THIS DAY,
I MISS YOU SO MUCH I WISH YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO PASS AWAY.

7/29/09
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 14 August 2009

: ( This was so sad, yet brilliant in expressing each emotion in this poem

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Shirley Woods 14 August 2009

So sad - didn't expect that ending. Expressed well.

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Patricia Panos 14 August 2009

Sad but beautifully written. I wish I could write like that.

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Aziz Alkaabi 14 August 2009

This is a beautiful creation, no doubt, but the title is not apt. It confused me.

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Bob Blackwell 15 August 2009

A fine tribute for a someone passed away.

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Mahsa Mahdavi 24 September 2009

It was the first poem of yours which I chose & read.It was perfect & I really loved it.I hope the others will be this much nice too...

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 19 September 2009

moving Poem! keep giving Flowers to her, because they are among the best way to express your sincere Love feelings/ 10 for your Apologies

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Deborah Cromer 12 September 2009

This poem has great meaning. You write it out well. Very sad and touching, it makes the reader really feel and think. The ending is very deep. Written out very well and with lots of heart. Well done. DC

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Marieta Maglas 11 September 2009

nice sad lyric poem, very well written...touching...10+++++

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 25 August 2009

This is a nice poem, touching.

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