Treasure Island

JOSE MURGUIA

(4/14/80 / aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE))

FLOWERS..


IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON VALENTINE'S DAY,
AND FOR NOT SHOWING MY LOVE IN THAT SPECIAL WAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON MOTHERS DAY,
AND FOR NOT APPRECIATING WHAT YOU DO
FOR OUR CHILDREN NIGHT AND DAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON OUR ANNIVERSARY,
I NEVER MEANT TO HURT YOUR FEELINGS AND IM SORRY.

IM SO SORRY FOR HAVING TO GIVE YOU FLOWERS
ONLY ON THIS DAY,
I MISS YOU SO MUCH I WISH YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO PASS AWAY.

7/29/09
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

Submitted: Thursday, August 13, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, September 16, 2009

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  • Mahsa Mahdavi (9/24/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    It was the first poem of yours which I chose & read.It was perfect & I really loved it.I hope the others will be this much nice too... (Report) Reply

  • Deborah Cromer (9/12/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    This poem has great meaning. You write it out well. Very sad and touching, it makes the reader really feel and think. The ending is very deep. Written out very well and with lots of heart. Well done. DC (Report) Reply

  • Barbara Terry (9/3/2009 12:35:00 PM)

    This is a very powerful poem with powerful emotions. It is hard when a loved one passes away...a 10+++++.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara (Report) Reply

  • Free Spirit (8/20/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    Only the 2nd poem I have read of yours and so touching, it caught me by surprise. (Report) Reply

  • Lorina Zapata (8/18/2009 6:09:00 PM)

    I love the simple poems where emotions are expressed lucidly and so effectivley. Jose, one may read your poem and think they know exactly where it's going and then the ending hits you like a ton of bricks. Thats what poetry is all about...expecting the unexpected especially when it comes to emotions. Great poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • Steven S (8/18/2009 3:09:00 PM)

    Wow, what a whiplash ending... I did not see that coming... like an episode of the Twilight Zone... what a cautionary tale... like the song says, 'Shower the people you love with love.' the next second is not guaranteed to anyone. (Report) Reply

  • Danny H (8/14/2009 12:27:00 AM)

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    This was so sad, yet brilliant in expressing each emotion in this poem (Report) Reply

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