JOSE MURGUIA

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Flowers.. - Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON VALENTINE'S DAY,
AND FOR NOT SHOWING MY LOVE IN THAT SPECIAL WAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON MOTHERS DAY,
AND FOR NOT APPRECIATING WHAT YOU DO
FOR OUR CHILDREN NIGHT AND DAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON OUR ANNIVERSARY,
I NEVER MEANT TO HURT YOUR FEELINGS AND IM SORRY.

IM SO SORRY FOR HAVING TO GIVE YOU FLOWERS
ONLY ON THIS DAY,
I MISS YOU SO MUCH I WISH YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO PASS AWAY.

7/29/09
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia


Comments about Flowers.. by JOSE MURGUIA

  • Mahsa Mahdavi (9/24/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    It was the first poem of yours which I chose & read.It was perfect & I really loved it.I hope the others will be this much nice too... (Report) Reply

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/19/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    moving Poem! keep giving Flowers to her, because they are among the best way to express your sincere Love feelings/

    10 for your Apologies (Report) Reply

  • Deborah Cromer Deborah Cromer (9/12/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    This poem has great meaning. You write it out well. Very sad and touching, it makes the reader really feel and think. The ending is very deep. Written out very well and with lots of heart. Well done. DC (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (9/11/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    nice sad lyric poem, very well written...touching...10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Barbara Terry (9/3/2009 12:35:00 PM)

    This is a very powerful poem with powerful emotions. It is hard when a loved one passes away...a 10+++++.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara (Report) Reply

  • Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan (8/25/2009 5:45:00 PM)

    This is a nice poem, touching. (Report) Reply

  • Free Spirit (8/20/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    Only the 2nd poem I have read of yours and so touching, it caught me by surprise. (Report) Reply

  • Nic Leisure (8/20/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    what a great peace, every sad at the end.....it's a 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Sam Yang (8/19/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    That was truly moving, I rated it a 10. =) -Sam (Report) Reply

  • Lorina Zapata (8/18/2009 6:09:00 PM)

    I love the simple poems where emotions are expressed lucidly and so effectivley. Jose, one may read your poem and think they know exactly where it's going and then the ending hits you like a ton of bricks. Thats what poetry is all about...expecting the unexpected especially when it comes to emotions. Great poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • Steven S (8/18/2009 3:09:00 PM)

    Wow, what a whiplash ending... I did not see that coming... like an episode of the Twilight Zone... what a cautionary tale... like the song says, 'Shower the people you love with love.' the next second is not guaranteed to anyone. (Report) Reply

  • Bob Blackwell (8/15/2009 3:30:00 AM)

    A fine tribute for a someone passed away. (Report) Reply

  • Aziz Alkaabi Aziz Alkaabi (8/14/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful creation, no doubt, but the title is not apt.
    It confused me. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Panos (8/14/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    Sad but beautifully written. I wish I could write like that. (Report) Reply

  • Shirley Woods (8/14/2009 12:07:00 PM)

    So sad - didn't expect that ending. Expressed well. (Report) Reply

  • Danny H (8/14/2009 12:27:00 AM)

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    This was so sad, yet brilliant in expressing each emotion in this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 16, 2009


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