JOSE MURGUIA

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Flowers.. - Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON VALENTINE'S DAY,
AND FOR NOT SHOWING MY LOVE IN THAT SPECIAL WAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON MOTHERS DAY,
AND FOR NOT APPRECIATING WHAT YOU DO
FOR OUR CHILDREN NIGHT AND DAY.

IM SORRY FOR NOT GIVING YOU FLOWERS
ON OUR ANNIVERSARY,
I NEVER MEANT TO HURT YOUR FEELINGS AND IM SORRY.

IM SO SORRY FOR HAVING TO GIVE YOU FLOWERS
ONLY ON THIS DAY,
I MISS YOU SO MUCH I WISH YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO PASS AWAY.

7/29/09
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia


Comments about Flowers.. by JOSE MURGUIA

  • Rookie Mahsa Mahdavi (9/24/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    It was the first poem of yours which I chose & read.It was perfect & I really loved it.I hope the others will be this much nice too... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/19/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    moving Poem! keep giving Flowers to her, because they are among the best way to express your sincere Love feelings/

    10 for your Apologies (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Deborah Cromer (9/12/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    This poem has great meaning. You write it out well. Very sad and touching, it makes the reader really feel and think. The ending is very deep. Written out very well and with lots of heart. Well done. DC (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,773 Points Marieta Maglas (9/11/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    nice sad lyric poem, very well written...touching...10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Terry (9/3/2009 12:35:00 PM)

    This is a very powerful poem with powerful emotions. It is hard when a loved one passes away...a 10+++++.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan (8/25/2009 5:45:00 PM)

    This is a nice poem, touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Free Spirit (8/20/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    Only the 2nd poem I have read of yours and so touching, it caught me by surprise. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nic Leisure (8/20/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    what a great peace, every sad at the end.....it's a 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sam Yang (8/19/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    That was truly moving, I rated it a 10. =) -Sam (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lorina Zapata (8/18/2009 6:09:00 PM)

    I love the simple poems where emotions are expressed lucidly and so effectivley. Jose, one may read your poem and think they know exactly where it's going and then the ending hits you like a ton of bricks. Thats what poetry is all about...expecting the unexpected especially when it comes to emotions. Great poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven S (8/18/2009 3:09:00 PM)

    Wow, what a whiplash ending... I did not see that coming... like an episode of the Twilight Zone... what a cautionary tale... like the song says, 'Shower the people you love with love.' the next second is not guaranteed to anyone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (8/15/2009 3:30:00 AM)

    A fine tribute for a someone passed away. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aziz Alkaabi (8/14/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful creation, no doubt, but the title is not apt.
    It confused me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Patricia Panos (8/14/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    Sad but beautifully written. I wish I could write like that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shirley Woods (8/14/2009 12:07:00 PM)

    So sad - didn't expect that ending. Expressed well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Danny H (8/14/2009 12:27:00 AM)

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    This was so sad, yet brilliant in expressing each emotion in this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 16, 2009


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