**fog** Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

**fog**

Rating: 4.4


Lovely little white cat
set its paw over the harbour
moving into the city
a silent bless for lover`s joy.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 03 November 2009

its almost a haiku well done................Thanks!

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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009

Marvelous..A nice metaphor... Excellent imagination... Have seen the fog many times...Never in this prespective. Superb! A sweet 10. Ranjit

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Rakesh Bedi 03 November 2009

what an imagination you have, lago lago...great, dear!

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Sandra Martyres 03 November 2009

An imaginative piece Lago Lago...with a neat metaphor

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Walterrean Salley 04 November 2009

Beautiful write. Our minds are running parallel tonight. Immediate connection.

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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

good write, short and brief. Yeah my interpretation of this piece is it is the nature of fog to crawl all over like a feline or cat so silent, so soft and wise predator.

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Eyan Desir 09 November 2009

Short but your words captures the poem well.. good job..

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Antonio Liao 08 November 2009

like a cat...tickles with many wonder... Superb poem of ecstasy....thank you for sharing...God bless....a 10 +++

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This is beautiful lago. I love cats and my ragdoll cat was run over a few months ago. The metaphor is lovely too! 10 love Karin

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2009

Lovely little white cat set its paw over the harbour moving into the city a silent bless for lover`s joy..... it is nice to ponder ovr beautiful poem.. good imagination....10 read mine...cats all over...cuckoo

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