Fog Poem by Natali Surjan

Fog



Fog it grabs you and strangles you till you die.
fog is alot like you.you wait till the right moment and then kill, kill, kill.
Fog you cant see throw it and is the best way to kill.
you walk in the fog kill me and run.
run to save yourself and to tell the world im dead. ya ya ya.
a person you fail to tell, falls over me and screams.
'Fog, oh good Fog, thank you for killing her, so i dont have to.'
Fog killed me, Fog hated me, Fog dispised me.
you are fog, thank you, you saved me from the crule world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Lutwyche 10 October 2008

Maybe it’s me, but I don’t get it at all! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Manonton Dalan 18 September 2008

fear over guys(fog) ... hmmm... ease those violent tendencies. not really good for fog. take care.md

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 April 2008

nicely written.............leaving the scars................intact

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