Natali Surjan

Rookie (24\01\1994)

Fog - Poem by Natali Surjan

Fog it grabs you and strangles you till you die.
fog is alot like you.you wait till the right moment and then kill, kill, kill.
Fog you cant see throw it and is the best way to kill.
you walk in the fog kill me and run.
run to save yourself and to tell the world im dead. ya ya ya.
a person you fail to tell, falls over me and screams.
'Fog, oh good Fog, thank you for killing her, so i dont have to.'
Fog killed me, Fog hated me, Fog dispised me.
you are fog, thank you, you saved me from the crule world.


Comments about Fog by Natali Surjan

  • Rookie Pamela Lutwyche (10/10/2008 4:44:00 PM)

    Maybe it’s me, but I don’t get it at all! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 300 Points Manonton Dalan (9/18/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    fear over guys(fog) ... hmmm... ease those violent tendencies. not
    really good for fog. take care.md (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/20/2008 5:14:00 AM)

    nicely written.............leaving the scars................intact (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008



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