Foiled Poem by Axiom Wheeler

Foiled

Rating: 5.0


I’m disappointed. I’m defeated.
When I run I just revolve.
I’m discomfited. I’m distraught.
When I’m in a puzzle it never seems to solve.

I feel so down. I feel so low.
I guess I’ll lay here on the ground.
I feel so humble. I feel so deep.
I look so low and feeble that the dust it does surround.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 November 2008

Poem captures the feeling

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