*fool Poem by HAZEL Calumarde

*fool

Rating: 3.0


I'm a fool
and yeah you are too
and because you are,
now I have you in myheart,
so close to my wallet
yet I don't give a damn
you count the same
as other poets
you are a liar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 12 January 2009

now much improved write...very good...10

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Ency Bearis 09 January 2009

this nice..but there is something wrong with regards to meter..see my email to you..and I can reccomend this for being a good one and make a 10 if this will be edited....8

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