Footprints Poem by Alafe Ramat

Footprints

Rating: 5.0


Swept over a magical land, needn't be a magical brush, a magical time that tame our after paces, who is meant to heal the world? whose destiny is meant to change the course of history, but so is a today, that is set to sail and away, driven into the cunning stones lies statues, blended with the breathing land, and so close on our heels, it screamed into the hollow earth, needn't be a gaze over us, around us is a pleasantry, that is vivid to the eye, breathing still are holes dug into the earth, wouldn't let go, needn't be told, on the sand of time yet they laid, imminent behind a legend of time, it dug still, on and on, chasing our shadows, never letting go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shihabudheen K J 28 May 2012

One of the finest descriptive works i ever read on footprints.relating footprints with history, paths, voyages and all missing links.great

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Dave Walker 28 May 2012

A rreally great poem, like it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2015

whose destiny is meant to change the course of history. it is a big question that you raise. is it not our responsibility as poets to write and change the course of history? a very nice poem thank you tony

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 29 June 2012

this is a different style of presenting verses.......so beautifully style and good one with feel! !

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Pheko Motaung 23 June 2012

A great poem! A marvelous piece of outstanding writing! Well done

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Romeo Della Valle 10 June 2012

A very well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your emotion and talent besides your beauty! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo NYC

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 June 2012

written with flair and brushed well the poetic spirit.

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