Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

For A Beautiful Face - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

For a beautiful face all that I could do
Give all my pleasures and take all her woe.

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Comments about For A Beautiful Face by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie Sonya Florentino (2/23/2009 10:36:00 PM)

    damn that beautiful face! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Al Ramos (2/20/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    Eye candy can surely satisfy the sweet tooth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathryn Marie Thurman (2/20/2009 12:19:00 AM)

    truely the work of a gentlemen,
    very moving and filled with emotion.
    wonderful!

    best wishes,
    Katie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Layla Stone (2/18/2009 10:15:00 PM)

    wonderful poem palas! it was wrote eith feeling plus it rymes! love this!
    -Layla (Report) Reply

  • Rookie life is all about happiness and peace (2/17/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    a beautiful face... with a lovely heart...filled with love and care...lovely romantic piece.... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (1/3/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    Hmm... quite romantic... I hope she has a beautiful mind also along with the face... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (12/21/2008 1:41:00 AM)

    I also enjoyed this poem, for a beautiful face we will give up many things. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (12/15/2008 8:43:00 PM)

    I always enjoyed reading your poems Ray sahab. They have great irony, and u know how to tell a thing poetically. I remembered a lyric sung by Mukhesh
    'jo thumko oo pasand vohi baath karenge' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 436 Points Indira Renganathan (12/9/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    Both peacock and crow have raucous voices...anyway two negatives make one affirmative...so you both will have no quarrel...God bless..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (12/1/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    beauty and brains a great combination. inner beauty, not extenal enhanced by borrowed plumes, is what is truly beautiful. nice composition, the ending takes by surprise. a good one

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 107 Points Rani Turton (12/1/2008 8:05:00 AM)

    Lovely closing line, really original! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 78 Points Maia Padua (12/1/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    really a great and beautiful write..so sweet...against all odds...a piece that expresses sacrifice for a dear one. Beautiful face.....deserves a beautiful write.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (11/26/2008 7:58:00 AM)

    wowwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! !
    really a beautiful poem Palas for a beautiful face.
    dont forget me I HAVE A BEAUTIFUL FACE TOO -Lol
    10++++++++ regards anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Moushumi moushumi (11/26/2008 7:10:00 AM)

    I enjoy your poem always as i enjoy JOY GOSWAMI's. your syllables in arow are great & joyful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/25/2008 10:28:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Plas, I really enjoyed it....10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points C. P. Sharma (11/24/2008 9:37:00 PM)

    Awesome poem, Palas

    All that you have to do is:
    Be one with the beauty,
    There lies your duty.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (11/24/2008 4:42:00 PM)

    Love is greater than surface cosmetics

    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,704 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/24/2008 1:55:00 AM)

    Aesthetics fade, but in absolute love, there is a more captive beauty within, and beyond any exterior attraction.Very Nice Write, Palas...The couplet stanzaec sructure works well, here.

    FjR (Report) Reply










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