' ' ' ' For A Walk(For Lyn) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' For A Walk(For Lyn)

Rating: 2.8


The chair
hugs me

holds me
like it loves me

good book good wine
couldn't be more comfy.

She appears before me
ensconced in coat, hat, scowl & scarf.

'Not now...please! '
I plead telepathically

but she doesn't speak
...telepathy.

Her mittens dangling
like an extra pair of hands.

'Come on! '
she makes me an offer I can't

refuse

giving it to me
straigt.

'I'm bringing you
for a walk! '

I try to confuse her
by telling her

her left hand shoe
is on her right hand foot

& her right hand shoe
is only a dog bitten summer sandal.

She looks
at me

with a cold
so what.

I give up
give in

know that I
can't win

laugh as I
un-comfort myself.

'I need a hand
to hold me

so the wind won't
push me about! '

We walk off
into Time

(her hand in mine)

always tis
moment

exists
for me.

MY little girl
talking my heart

.. for a walk.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 05 May 2009

this is so charming... little girls can do that to you (and then they grow up, and they continue to... :)

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Scarlett Treat 27 April 2009

As ever, my dearest one, I love and adore your Tilly poems. In this one, I especially like the line 'in coat, hat, SCOWL and scarf, ' but each line pulls me in. For instance, the beginning of your being so cosily ensconced in the chair, and her firmness, nay, her insistance, that you are being taken for a walk...I have heard of being led by the nose...but love instead the idea of your 'being led by the heart.' 'Tis just wonderful, marvelous!

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Fay Slimm 24 April 2009

Wonderfully tender - - and beautifully compressed into a gem of a piece.... enjoyed every nuance - - especially your 'little girl talking my heart - for a walk'...10 from Fay..

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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