For Bri Edwards Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

For Bri Edwards

Rating: 5.0


The new world and the new cars
The rich men and their wars

But there are people who concerns
Who are sad because of the others burn

My friend Bri, a man from sky
A real frank one, I can say with no lies

A friend who you can trust in
A person who helps you to win

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 22 July 2013

nice write to Bri Edwards. good friendship

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Unwritten Soul 13 July 2013

Hahahahahaah I smiling reading Bri's comment below when he said It revealed my niceness LOL....you are Bri..and Ellie, this is awesome, you are our lil charm in hearts! _SOul

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Bri Edwards 13 July 2013

dear (see, i used dear this time) Ellias, thank you very much. i like it! of course i like it; it reveals my niceness! i shall send it to my poemlist for that reason AT LEAST! and i'll send you to my poetlist (you are already a FRIEND) . i would correct some of your english in the poem if i wanted you to get the highest grade in your english class, BUT i already rate your english highly enough for someone who learns more languages than i would ever attempt to learn! ! :) bri

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Dave Walker 13 July 2013

A great poem and a great tribute.

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Dave Walker 13 July 2013

A great poem and a great tribute.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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