Aidan Keith

Rookie (Georgia)

For Her - Poem by Aidan Keith

She is beautiful.
She is beautiful with make up on.
She is beautiful without it on.
She is beautiful right after running miles on the treadmill.
She is beautiful when she isn't smiling.
She is beautiful when she is smirking.
She is beautiful when she is smiling.
She is beautiful inside.
She is beautiful out.
Her hair is perfect.
Oh, she is beautiful.

Sometimes she isn't paying attention to me and I will stare at her;
She can feel me staring so she looks and I turn up a smirk,
Then full smile,
Then she follows;
I love making her smile.
I love your smile.


Comments about For Her by Aidan Keith

  • Rookie - 0 Points Riquetta Elliott (2/22/2008 10:29:00 PM)

    You are so sensitive and true. Great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Armando Hernandez (1/8/2008 1:21:00 PM)

    great poem, its exactly how i feel about a certain beautiful, enticing girl that i know. made me smile. great job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Missy Trinity Ferrari. (2/27/2006 9:48:00 PM)

    Hmm some true love right there I like that the repetition adds more to the effect
    Great job
    Love
    ♥ Melissa♥ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 26, 2006



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