For Leeds City Council 5 (The Forgotten Shadows) Poem by Dave Alan Walker

For Leeds City Council 5 (The Forgotten Shadows)

Rating: 4.7


He's on his knees
arms outstretched
begging for a time machine
to take him back

He is the forgotten shadow
you see at night
a lost and lonely man
that time and the city has forgot

He used to have a family and a life
but then something went wrong
and the city just turned a blind eye

now he has no socks and no shoes
just his skin and his bones
he's the shadow that's lost his soul

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There is many people who live on the streets of Leeds, all forgotten. Some charities do what they
can.shame on Leeds city council for not doing more.
All they are doing is putting more people on the
street.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2013

Poem with a very good message...True life of many people living in streets....Good write.

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David Wood 29 July 2013

Have you shown this series of poems to Leeds counsellors, I am sure they will change their ways after you put them on the map. Have a read of my poem Alone on the Streets, it is similar. Here in Swansea we opened all the churches last winter for the homeless to sleep in at night. It was a good project that saved a few lives.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 July 2013

our own image how we abuse! when shall we wake up?

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Ken E Hall 06 August 2013

Very well said poem on a heartfelt situation which we all have around the world, ...perfect words, The Forgotten Shadows that generally drowned their life in drink. Trouble is not many people do anything to help sadly I'm one of them...great work reagrds

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Hazel Durham 31 July 2013

An intense and heart-rending poem about the people who are not allowed to have a voice in society!

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Frank (popeye) Pulver 30 July 2013

very good, reminds me of a few things that I wrote in the past.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 30 July 2013

A poem with a message to bring. It has arrived.

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Denis Martindale 29 July 2013

You may appreciate this version: tinyurl-dot-com/the-city-that-lost-its-soul Zoom in on the text size or click the main poetry page for this.

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