For Moon Poem by poet selvakumar

For Moon

Rating: 3.3


Moon are
swimming
clouds....

Clouds shado
clous the
Moon...
and open
the moon...

Moon was
Happly swimming...

15 days
full into black
15 days black
In to full moon...

Moon was beauty
of the sky...
sky was not
beauty for
Moon....

Around the stars
are beauty for
Moon....for moon...! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Van Jiaying 04 October 2009

I like this poem it's so vivid yesterday was Chinese lunar calendar's mid-autumn festival

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Sarah Gilliam 23 October 2006

I think it's beautiful...made me smile =)

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Vega Star 01 April 2006

Just a few mispelled words like shadow and clouds. Just keep writing.

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