For My Last Friend Poem by Vini Carberry

For My Last Friend

Rating: 4.3


I sit here, knife in hand,
Due to the pain I don't understand.
I run it over my bare skin,
I'm not going to heaven, I'll pay for this sin,
Im going to end all my pain,
My entire life now in vain,
It will hurt, I will bleed,
Now true freedom be my only need,
I will end all my dreams, every last one,
Knowing my destiny will never come,
Don't cry when i'm gone,
For in You, My life lives on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babasaheb Salve 01 September 2006

the hidden treasure inside of meaning baba

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Kee Thampi 28 July 2006

Now true freedom be my only need, I will end all my dreams, every last one, I be here for everything, everyone, I be here to share love and laughter I really love message you hide here

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Sandra Fowler 27 July 2006

Poignant, haunting write. You put your very soul into this one. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra

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Thats touchingly sad and beautiful. it shows so much love for your friend. Lovely work darling.

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