For Promise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

For Promise

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You are crimson red and fresh rose
Which happily I chose
To be always in vicinity
By the grace of almighty

What do I ask from Him?
Nothing more but powerful beam
To find you out from the crowd
And to speak a loud

Let people know
Where we intend to go?
Stay always together
And offer

It is our wish
And shall finish
Desire with reality
That shall be aim with quality

We shall sail in dreamland
Always together as friend
Pass through the lovely passage
And lovingly manage

I was rather mesmerized
By your charm and led
You took my hand by surprise
And consented with bright promises

Saturday, September 27, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 September 2014

Nice message Justin McMullen45 minutes ago The theme of an everlasting consenting unity is refreshingly bright here. I enjoyed your poem. Comment +1

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Asit Kumar Sanyal 27 September 2014

You are crimson red and fresh rose Which happily I chose ... Its a good start. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 September 2014

You are crimson red and fresh rose Which happily I chose

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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