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For The One I Love

Silky flames of fire
burning through my eyes
at the thoughts and desires
running through my mind

My love still burns
for the love of my life
she brings me to life
with her passion and desires

God only knows
How I would survive
Without her by my side


For my one true love, Adie.

Submitted: Saturday, July 14, 2012
Edited: Saturday, July 14, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

For my one true love, I love her more each day.
We've been together many years, each day
feels like the first time we met.

Comments about this poem (For The One I Love by Dave Alan Walker )

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  • Kevin Patrick (8/5/2012 11:23:00 PM)

    A sumptuous piece that casts me outside of my natural cynical disposition, Love real love shall reign supreme to the end of time.

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  • Whisperkwane Lamb (7/15/2012 1:04:00 AM)

    Like that firsr day in school and there she is, , , wow...and to have her for all of your life...wow...we man have it made wwhen we do think about it., ..they(the woman) put up with us(%$^^&&&) you know...and with love'em God only knows
    How I would survive
    Without her by my sideI know the feeling I'm a vietnam vet and she is still here and like you said
    God only knows
    How I would survive
    Without her by my side thank for let me roll that back around in my head..God bless you both...

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/14/2012 4:35:00 PM)

    A great tribute to your lady....

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  • Heather Wilson (7/14/2012 3:18:00 PM)

    A really wonderful poem, true love is far above any riches on this earth, beautiful comment in notes.

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  • Eric Cockrell (7/14/2012 8:09:00 AM)

    and the two of you together define love!

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