indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

For Whom I Know Not...5 - Poem by indira babbellapati

Throes of desire
Throws me into ecstatic Helplessness

Tears of
A moment once lived
Flow on slopes of life

Come,
Clasp my hand
In yours while
Walking on
Slippery slopes


Comments about For Whom I Know Not...5 by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 8,236 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/26/2013 3:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. Some clarifications required:
    Why the throes of desire throw you into ecstatic helplessness? And why is the 'h' of helplessness capital?
    Tears flowing on the slopes of life is a beautiful idea. And the ardent call in the last stanza is the most beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,734 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/20/2013 10:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,949 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/12/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    Tears flow on slopes of life making the way slippery. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013


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