indira babbellapati

Rookie - 40 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

For whom i know not...5


Throes of desire
Throws me into ecstatic Helplessness

Tears of
A moment once lived
Flow on slopes of life

Come,
Clasp my hand
In yours while
Walking on
Slippery slopes

Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (For whom i know not...5 by indira babbellapati )

Enter the verification code :

  • Bronze Star - 5,041 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/26/2013 3:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. Some clarifications required:
    Why the throes of desire throw you into ecstatic helplessness? And why is the 'h' of helplessness capital?
    Tears flowing on the slopes of life is a beautiful idea. And the ardent call in the last stanza is the most beautiful. (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. A Red, Red Rose, Robert Burns
  2. Address To A Haggis, Robert Burns
  3. A Man's a Man for A' That, Robert Burns
  4. To A Mouse, Robert Burns
  5. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  6. A Bottle And Friend, Robert Burns
  7. Who Ever Loved That Loved Not at First S.., Christopher Marlowe
  8. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  9. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  10. A Fond Kiss, Robert Burns

Poem of the Day

poet Christopher Marlowe

It lies not in our power to love or hate,
For will in us is overruled by fate.
When two are stripped, long ere the course begin,
We wish that one should love, the other win;

...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

New Poems

  1. Sunday's tears, Marilyn Jean
  2. Poe's Venture, Folayemi Akande
  3. Our Loving, Caring God, Dr John Celes
  4. Momentary Separation, Md. Ziaul Haque
  5. A Divine Bond, Md. Ziaul Haque
  6. SERENDIPITY, Aminath Neena
  7. To Be Intelligent, Md. Ziaul Haque
  8. Youth, Md. Ziaul Haque
  9. Prosetic [Prosaic + Poetic], Md. Ziaul Haque
  10. My Love for You is Reborn, Md. Ziaul Haque
[Hata Bildir]