For You Poem by priscila mataboge

thank you .i appreciate

Wow that poem is beautiful. It shows steadfastness and courage. It shows resilience and passion. It's beautiful, simply written, and sweet. It's direct and secinct. Well written.

Hi Priscila, Your first poem on ph: A nice poem on true love, which takes the lover any length to fulfill. The love that is ready to make all sacrifices for the lover. Although love may make one blind to the shortcomings of the lover, is ready sacrifices, love demands a lot from the beloved. Here, as you have pointed out subtly, one has to understand that he/she is a different individual and allow enough space for his/her own life; to allow his/her life and career. Many in love, tend to forget this. Great work. Technique may need a little fine-tuning. But, that time will take care of. Pl write more and continue to post.100+

For you I will travel up and down the hills For you There's no far place I couldn't reach For you There's no mistake I could not forgive..yes I will forgive and forget - - - - - - - Heart felt lines.