Forever Free Poem by Amy

Forever Free

Rating: 2.9


The night shines down
The music plays
They place his crown
And there he stays

Within my heart
His heart felt notions
Toy with my
Fragile emotions

He makes my heart
Skip a beat
When we’re apart
I feel defeat

He loves me
I love him back
And he’ll agree
We come in a pack

He kisses my cheek
I shine a smile
Completely unique
With our own special style

The crown is placed
Upon me
Face to face
Our love forever free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this poem was showing so much creativity in this one and I liked it 10/10

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Jenny Elvy 30 March 2016

A beautiful poem, I love your style

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A surrendering love of freedom. Beautiful to read! ; D

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very expressive and full of tenderness! ! like Rachmaninov Piano Music on words!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 April 2009

He makes my heart Skip a beat When we’re apart I feel defeat..................wondeful lines.........10+++...............

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Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008

another beautiful write amy with so much love and tenderness in it...i loved it thanks 10+++++ rgds asif

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