Jessica Beal

Forever Isn'T Long - Poem by Jessica Beal

Here I stand,
Crying in the rain.
Watching your tail-lights,
All I feel is pain.
I close the door behind me,
I lay back on my bed.
My heart begins to rip apart,
As thoughts enter into my head.
You're the one that told me,
We belonged together.
You're the one that mentioned.
You'd love me forever.
If you loved forever,
Not that it was wrong.
If you meant what you said,
Forever isn't long.

Comments about Forever Isn'T Long by Jessica Beal

  • Rookie Rachel Smailliw (7/21/2008 2:55:00 PM)

    Wow, i like it mucho mucho! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Bob Gibson (7/14/2008 1:21:00 AM)

    An incredable write Jessica, we have all felt the pain (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kiran Raza (7/13/2008 11:58:00 PM)

    I love this poem. you brought it out to life. definetly A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*~(\ /) ~*~Payyton: DrowningSorrow~*~(\ /) ~*~ (7/13/2008 11:56:00 PM)

    Beautiful write! ....

    <3Payton (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (7/13/2008 11:56:00 PM)

    Very passionate love poem, sad it did not work for you! Forever is long for two hearts in love, it only becomes short when either of the two falls out of it! A 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 15, 2008

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