Forever Isn'T Long Poem by Jessica Beal

Forever Isn'T Long

Rating: 4.8


Here I stand,
Crying in the rain.
Watching your tail-lights,
All I feel is pain.
I close the door behind me,
I lay back on my bed.
My heart begins to rip apart,
As thoughts enter into my head.
You're the one that told me,
We belonged together.
You're the one that mentioned.
You'd love me forever.
If you loved forever,
Not that it was wrong.
If you meant what you said,
Forever isn't long.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Smailliw 21 July 2008

Wow, i like it mucho mucho!

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Bob Gibson 14 July 2008

An incredable write Jessica, we have all felt the pain

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Kiran Raza 13 July 2008

I love this poem. you brought it out to life. definetly A 10

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Beautiful write! .... <3Payton

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Marvin Brato 13 July 2008

Very passionate love poem, sad it did not work for you! Forever is long for two hearts in love, it only becomes short when either of the two falls out of it! A 10.

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