'Forever More' Poem by Caleb Gonzales

'Forever More'



Far away
Or close by
Your not to far from my mind
I always try to see the world
The way you do
I'm just not as clear minded as you
Living in my own head
Making things make sense
In my own way
Being misunderstood
Forever more

Sunday, May 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nonsense
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 05 May 2014

I love the line...I always try to see the world the way you do.... within your write I sense your kindness and a longing to be heard. We hear you loud and clear! Keep posting! PEACE

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Mihaela Pirjol 22 June 2014

Being misunderstood sometimes is a sign of being unique, which is great. Beautiful poem.

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Julia Yusupova 19 May 2014

i can relate to this

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Caleb Gonzales 13 May 2014

Thank you Mary I appreciate it :)

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Mary Rowena 13 May 2014

Short and sweet. Been reading through your poems and they're very nice, keep it up :)

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Ruma Chaudhuri 06 May 2014

Excellent one. I like your poems. You know, breaking heart can produce a lot of nice creations. So, sometimes it is better for poets and others who are in the world of any creative world. Ha ha ha. Don't mind. Your poems are short and cute. I like this. Ruma

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Caleb Gonzales

Caleb Gonzales

Bakersfield California
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