Forever Ours. Poem by Fay Slimm

Forever Ours.

Rating: 5.0


There is a spacious airy
Place forever ours.
No-one can take away rare
Love like we possess, hours
Of daily discipline keeps
Us duty bound, yet
Night is when we sense release.
Dreams help us forget
The fight. Heart can speak to heart
When dark arrives, I
Run to thoughts of you, parting
Comes when dawn lights sky,
But by then we have dwelt in
Paradise. Now, our
Passion stilled, I bask within
The afterglow, feeling power
Beyond the norm., as alll night through
Bliss had bound me close to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Very nice, as if a dream through which a reader is passing! 10+

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Aijaz Asif 09 June 2009

Ah! ! ! ! 'My love in dream I see you thee, hand in hand strolling beside the silver sea' - asif another marvelous write like always fay, the whole poem is beautiful but these lines i loved most...... There is a spacious airy Place forever ours. No-one can take away rare Love like we possess, hour.....bravo, bravo many 10'ssss for this marvelous piece rgds asif

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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

A very splendid poem creeps in mind with a very soothing effect. Conservation of what we possess is really necessary for it would be fruitful for us forever....10

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

Very beautiful language here Fay...nice refreshment...enjoyed it very much.thanks regards shan

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Sue Sie 26 May 2009

A very tenderly written poem...peaceful thoughts in the evening time of comforting love........10++ Sue

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Fiona Davidson 26 May 2009

Wonderful romantic write Fay...10++++

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