Forever Severed Poem by DAVIDIA KARTINA

Forever Severed

Rating: 4.8


I'm gonna be absence Forever.
Becuase of You - Such Hair!
And sunning glowbeams will Sever; ...!
Upon adjunct flair.....? ? ?

Ceremoniously potter,
I did not win the lotter,
E! The ticket was too
Black like my true

Soul. I wonder if, he
Still thinks of, me
While drunken harangued justice sleeps;
Upon which shadowy walls he silent creeps.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 07 June 2007

This poem is excellent

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 05 June 2007

I like your 'jagged edge' approach. It's refreshing. L

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