Forgive Me. Poem by Moana Tuigamala

Forgive Me.

Rating: 5.0


Incomplete, not accomplished mission,
Forsaken eyes, blinded love.
Honesty, yet the best policy,
A difficult mystery left to solve.

Incredible moments,
Hard to forget.
Never-ending happiness,
To loose I shall not let.

Although I've tried,
It's just slipping away from me.
I wish I hadn't done this,
But that I cannot be.

I will crown you with my heart,
And dress you with my joy.
Although you're disappointed with me,
Please forgive me and annoy.

My stupidity and guiltyness,
On my shoulder it weighs.
But as for our hatred,
Just ' Let it Burn' as Usher says.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2008

A full 10 for this lucid and touchy composition.

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Anna jonson 28 August 2008

waaaaaw i like it... good job for writing it

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Nice....you have a real style when you write(type) ....

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