Baby Blue

Rookie (November 25,1988 / Pensacola)

Forgiveness And Relief - Poem by Baby Blue

i disappointed you
and hurt myself in the process.
i just need you to know that i am sorry
that i have torn my heart apart-fretting about
what you will say, how you will react, how i will feel

you were calm......and gentle.
forgiving and loving......and concerned.

thank you-you saved me from multiple days
of heartache, from self rebuke, and shame. thank you
for caring, and not being too firm; for being little and meek;
for seeing my overwhelming, self-inflicted pain;
for seeing me as the adult that you taught me to be.

im sorry....i love you.

written 1-24-08 for my daddy

Comments about Forgiveness And Relief by Baby Blue

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (5/2/2009 6:11:00 AM)


    very very nice (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/1/2008 9:22:00 PM)

    treasure your breath of life. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,336 Points Jerry Hughes (1/29/2008 4:04:00 PM)

    .............................that's a lot of self- retribution B B, but very well written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 24, 2008

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