Forgiving Detection Poem by Silent Speaker

Forgiving Detection

Rating: 2.3


Anger
struggle with I do
Hate
I have because of you

Pain
I daily feel
Frustration
to me so real

Hurt
eating away inside me
Bitter
I no longer want to be

Guilt
my own reflection
God
my forgiving detection

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cory Davis 11 June 2009

Wow, you've improved so much! This is amazing. I'm always looking for interesting structures. Very well done.

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