Dry corn fields
Wind blows gentle kisses
Droplets grace each blade
While the light sinks at dusk
A picture which is forsaken
Fourteen? Just a stripling but already a fine poet. Now this is poetry and very beautiful. Two contrasting works which will have one thing in common. A ten from me. Tom Billsborough
Well, coming from a 'corn country' myself, I can say this one strikes a bit of a chord. The fact that you wrote it over ten years ago is noteworthy as well. Welcome to PH Chelsea. Thanks for sharing
Thank you and it's my pleasure! I'm happy to come across country kin. This is part of a set of poems when I first began writing. I will post more in the morning. :)
A lovely manifestation of nature in the countryside at the time of sunset has been beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sublime start with a nice poem, Chelsea. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.