Erasmo Rayon

Rookie (June 27th,1990 / Mexico City)

Forgotten But Not Gone - Poem by Erasmo Rayon

“Alone” is the peace I can’t fathom
The unimpressive morrow that yields no sorrow
“Alone” is the company that will not wallow
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Comments about Forgotten But Not Gone by Erasmo Rayon

  • Rookie Michael Ardizzone (8/30/2007 10:58:00 PM)

    I thought the first two stanzas got this poem off to an intriguing start. The idea of 'Alone' struck me as similar to the concept of being at one with the way of things, with nature. The fact that this poem turned into a love poem weakened it in my eyes, though it is still effective and has some great imagery. (Report) Reply

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