Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 3 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

Fountain


O gushing crescendo
Thy silent stealth
A cool and misty
Watery wealth
Oh glorious liberty,
Down the rocky graves
So calm yet spritely
Bright and brave

My sacred wash
My life my dreams
O swelling thoughts
And wholesome themes
O blissful luxuries,
By thy side
When melancholy
Or in pensive sights

My head
Thou washeth
In baptism clean
My sins of Adam
And of Eve
That original sin
That blast
A cast to loosen
To secure
a placeof reason
That paradise
Thy heaven

O you fountain of love
Elemental divine
Lodged in your mystical deep ravines
The knowledge, the truth,
The unfinished period falls
No voice be hushed,
No life treads deep
In true silence
And sleep profound
As I in childhood sweetly sleep
Untroubled where I lay
Beside thee
Above the vaulted skies

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

14/03/2009

Submitted: Saturday, March 14, 2009
Edited: Thursday, March 26, 2009

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  • Rookie - 89 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/10/2010 2:55:00 PM)

    From the depth with deep and profound elucidation
    Nice distillation and escalating
    10
    Ms Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (5/19/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    A profound and deep poem,
    From Original Sin to Eternal rest
    You make us walk through
    Tall and green forest trees
    When suddenly it opens out
    Into a clearing where falls
    A sheet of shimmering water
    Into a deep clear cool pool
    The spay it refreshes us
    The shade it gives us rest
    And I meditate in communion
    With my God!
    Most wonderful poem I've read, my fav too.
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (5/16/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    good job, good writing that calls for purification of the mind. well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/8/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    Just beautiful in every way- a joy to read and read again. Thank you for Brilliance. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Myrtle Thomas (4/6/2009 12:19:00 AM)

    I agree with Arijit this is so exquisite, beautiful expressive.I loved it a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandhya S N (3/28/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    Well written
    sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arijit Kumar (3/28/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    My head
    Thou washeth
    In baptism clean
    My sins of Adam
    And of Eve
    That original sin

    I just simply love this poem....so soothing & devine...thanks for sharing it....100+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Lily Law (3/27/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    I'm speechless...
    Just 'wow'...
    Nice one..
    ^-^ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (3/23/2009 9:40:00 PM)

    wow! it simply flows

    ...............................................Oh glorious liberty! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 269 Points Seema Chowdhury (3/23/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    untroubled where I lay....... lovely composition, truly enjoyed your work. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (3/22/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem! Let the fountain of love from within flow, embracing life to make us glow! 10!
    -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duh Huh (3/21/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    Your words flow like the fountain, beautiful and refreshing. A touching poetic rendition of a prayer. Thank you very much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (3/20/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    An eloquent prayer. You are indeed a wordsmith worthy of the name.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shekhar Joshi (3/18/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    wow! great! amazing!
    a true beauty
    excellent work (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 639 Points Louis Rams (3/17/2009 10:06:00 PM)

    the lord cleanses our hearts and souls.
    a miraculous wonder to behold.
    in this poem you can feel his strength
    coming out to touch you.

    A GR8 WRITE A TEN (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (3/17/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    Vrey nicley done, and with a very nice flow...... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 876 Points Sadiqullah Khan (3/17/2009 8:59:00 AM)

    Very good poem, light and sweet 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (3/16/2009 5:48:00 PM)

    fountain here refers to ''continuous'........good idea expressing fountain of love...
    naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/16/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    a lovely thought expressed with clarity and beauty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pablo Cruise (3/16/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    Your words run breathless from your pen. Truly undeniable! ! (Report) Reply

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