Dr Hitesh Sheth

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Fountain - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

O gushing crescendo
Thy silent stealth
A cool and misty
Watery wealth
Oh glorious liberty,
Down the rocky graves
So calm yet spritely
Bright and brave

My sacred wash
My life my dreams
O swelling thoughts
And wholesome themes
O blissful luxuries,
By thy side
When melancholy
Or in pensive sights

My head
Thou washeth
In baptism clean
My sins of Adam
And of Eve
That original sin
That blast
A cast to loosen
To secure
a placeof reason
That paradise
Thy heaven

O you fountain of love
Elemental divine
Lodged in your mystical deep ravines
The knowledge, the truth,
The unfinished period falls
No voice be hushed,
No life treads deep
In true silence
And sleep profound
As I in childhood sweetly sleep
Untroubled where I lay
Beside thee
Above the vaulted skies

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

14/03/2009


Comments about Fountain by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/10/2010 2:55:00 PM)

    From the depth with deep and profound elucidation
    Nice distillation and escalating
    10
    Ms Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

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  • Pandian Angelina (5/19/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    A profound and deep poem,
    From Original Sin to Eternal rest
    You make us walk through
    Tall and green forest trees
    When suddenly it opens out
    Into a clearing where falls
    A sheet of shimmering water
    Into a deep clear cool pool
    The spay it refreshes us
    The shade it gives us rest
    And I meditate in communion
    With my God!
    Most wonderful poem I've read, my fav too.
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Obinna Eruchie (5/16/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    good job, good writing that calls for purification of the mind. well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Cindy Kreiner Sera Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/8/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    Just beautiful in every way- a joy to read and read again. Thank you for Brilliance. (Report) Reply

  • Myrtle Thomas Myrtle Thomas (4/6/2009 12:19:00 AM)

    I agree with Arijit this is so exquisite, beautiful expressive.I loved it a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Sandhya S N (3/28/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    Well written
    sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Arijit Kumar (3/28/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    My head
    Thou washeth
    In baptism clean
    My sins of Adam
    And of Eve
    That original sin

    I just simply love this poem....so soothing & devine...thanks for sharing it....100+++ (Report) Reply

  • Lily Law (3/27/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    I'm speechless...
    Just 'wow'...
    Nice one..
    ^-^ (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir Malini Kadir (3/23/2009 9:40:00 PM)

    wow! it simply flows

    ...............................................Oh glorious liberty! ! (Report) Reply

  • Seema Chowdhury (3/23/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    untroubled where I lay....... lovely composition, truly enjoyed your work. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Raj Nandy (3/22/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem! Let the fountain of love from within flow, embracing life to make us glow! 10!
    -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Duh Huh (3/21/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    Your words flow like the fountain, beautiful and refreshing. A touching poetic rendition of a prayer. Thank you very much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (3/20/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    An eloquent prayer. You are indeed a wordsmith worthy of the name.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Shekhar Joshi Shekhar Joshi (3/18/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    wow! great! amazing!
    a true beauty
    excellent work (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams Louis Rams (3/17/2009 10:06:00 PM)

    the lord cleanses our hearts and souls.
    a miraculous wonder to behold.
    in this poem you can feel his strength
    coming out to touch you.

    A GR8 WRITE A TEN (Report) Reply

  • Bonnie Collins (3/17/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    Vrey nicley done, and with a very nice flow...... (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (3/17/2009 8:59:00 AM)

    Very good poem, light and sweet 10 (Report) Reply

  • Naidz Ladia (3/16/2009 5:48:00 PM)

    fountain here refers to ''continuous'........good idea expressing fountain of love...
    naizz (Report) Reply

  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (3/16/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    a lovely thought expressed with clarity and beauty (Report) Reply

  • Pablo Cruise (3/16/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    Your words run breathless from your pen. Truly undeniable! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 26, 2009


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