ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,654 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Four values


Life of all creation
has to subscribe four values
like dawn to dusk has to cover
mid-day and mid-night

each n every moment
can not be skipped
as impossible to jump
from dusk to dawn

Has to wait for each moment
that brings a new message
for life and hope

Whole life is calculated
with escalating value
of each moment of life
for completeness of life

Submitted: Saturday, September 07, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

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  • Rookie - 149 Points Laurie X3 (10/11/2013 7:38:00 PM)

    Yes skipping moments, reliving moments, it's all impossible really. Reminds me of window shopping. My Mom used to take me window shopping so much when I was a kid, how I hated it! Why look at something you cannot have! She used to say ah but one can dream! I always thought it was taking time away from the things I actually had to do....and it was....How I wished then that I could fast forward time past the window shopping......a foolish way to waste time..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Queeny Gona (10/7/2013 9:51:00 PM)

    So true dear Ramesh Rai....tough times along with joyous moments make s one's life complete! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,614 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/8/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    There is a value for each moment you say and reduce the values to four. It would be nice if you elaborate the four values. Maybe one can make a list of four as one feels. My list looks like respect, compassion, love, peace. Thank you for the poem which made me think a lot. (Report) Reply

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