Fourteen Lines Poem by michael oliver

Fourteen Lines



Smoking in the door
Smoking from the rain
Loud at night experts
Hellow Geezer through traffic
I remember explaining anatomy
On his ripped torso
While my mate prattled
His prophetic religion spiel
Prognostication flowing from him
Albinus and Vesallius quietude
My certainties soft bloom
Now in this passing
I am recognized 'Geezer'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is just an excercise to keep my craft skills alert. I pass this pub every night on my way home from work this records one passing.It is a bit influenced by The American style of writng which I admire but just canot achieve
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luscious Larry 07 January 2013

The Dogg says you're boffo, and dang it, he's right. Loud at night experts! That is sublime, man!

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Scotty Dogg 07 January 2013

Yes! This is excellent poetry. I think you 'achieve' a great deal. The author knows how to Put The Words Together. I love 'prattled' and 'My certainties soft bloom...' Recommending!

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