Fragrant Moments. Poem by Fay Slimm

Fragrant Moments.

Rating: 5.0


To imbibe fragrance
................................... is to feel alive.
Scent comes, breath-borne
.........................into the mind, events
Of daylight bring blossoms,
............................... which only thrive
In petal-spun perfumed time,
.................................. and are meant
To lift each inhaler
............................... to soar skyward.

You gave me fragranced Spring,
........................... wafting love words.
The air vibrated
...................with sweet- violet replies,
Which when mixed,
..............such spicy aromas occured.

Moments now burst
............. with odoured amour, power
Us with fine essence,
.................... and perfume our hours.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Kempson 06 September 2009

Nice warm piece of poetry Fay enjoyed this thank you Daniel

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Tom Balch 06 September 2009

Lovely words, beautiful moments Fay, a lovely piece,10/10 Tom

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Sandra Martyres 06 September 2009

You spread a lovely fragrance Fay with this beautiful poem...10 ofcourse

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 September 2009

My senses are as open as the wind, and ingesting the virtual essence of your effulgent rendering, young lady! Very Fine work, Fay, indeed! FjR

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Viola Grey 06 September 2009

Fay, I really love the way this is written...it spills out of the mouth and lingers on the air...beautiful, as always.

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C. P. Sharma 20 September 2009

Fay, this is perfect in full measure - rhyme and rhythm.10+++++++++++ Mind, vials of essence stores Fragrance of the youth galore, Just swab the choicest scent Whenever, you feel indolent. CP

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John Knight 19 September 2009

Hi Fay - Lovely poem with form - rhyme and rhythm. This is very appropriate in a poem about scents. The study of AROMATHERAPY reveals that fragrances are specific to individuals - a scent that complements their personality. Fragrances are also specific to places and - in our memories - to very special occasions! In you poem you remind us of the effect of fragrances: they 'Enliven' 'Enhance love' 'Uplift' a beautiful elegant poem well deseving of a TEN for a super-Poetess! Love in poetry - JOHN

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Georgia Girl 17 September 2009

Oh WOW, simply beautiful! ! I could just see myself walking through a meadow on a gorgeous breezey spring day...10

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Carl Harris 16 September 2009

This is such a sensually inspiring poem, Fay, and your delicious phrasing in this fine write was a pleasure to read and experience and left me hanging on every wonderful word. Carl.

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Fay, you weave perfume magic into this magical poem. Your perfume wafts across the page and brings with it your talented words. 10 love Karin

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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