Free-Vention>>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Free-Vention>>>



i was in room with 4 guys
listening about daily talks
when suddenly one became
agitated, raising his voice
we were train to say time out
on this situation so i called
he ask permission to say one
sentence; i said take your time

it went smoothly; we are laughing
we all served military in our life
we have famous word 'stand-down'
i wonder what could be like if we,
we were not, our training is good
i hope all companies has training
to prevent misunderstanding escalation
it only takes less than hour, peace

Tuesday, March 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: workshop
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 15 March 2016

Yes sometime people can get worked up rather quickly and need simply to be told they are doing so in order to correct themselves. Good work

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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