ameya deshpande

Freedom - Poem by ameya deshpande

Freedom is losing without fears
Slavery is just tears

Freedom is being proud & great
Slavery is just to regret

Freedom is something worth dying for
Slavery is nothing worth living for

Freedom is like being a warrior
If you are a slave then your fate is much sad & inferior

Freedom is like loving your woman & your wine
Slavery is just hopelessly guessing that 'I am fine'

Freedom is the truth & the success
Slavery is a grief in excess

Freedom is caring for your soul
Freedom is being master of you own destiny
Freedom is having self-respect

So if you are a slave then make yourself free
I bet that then you will grow like a sacred tree.

Comments about Freedom by ameya deshpande

  • Gold Star - 50,721 Points Chinedu Dike (12/8/2014 8:14:00 AM)

    A nice poem on freedom, well articulated and written with insight. I like the rhyme pattern of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Jossy Okun (11/10/2014 8:14:00 AM)

    So meaningful.. Freedom speaks ur heart.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (11/13/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, freedom should be for everybody. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, June 25, 2012

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