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simran arora

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Freedom......


For me,
my freedom is at the priority,
conbination of adjustment,
and compromises in majority....


For me,
my freedom is my wisdom,
and wants to rais me up from all critic,
with a working mind, out of room....


For me,
my freedom is to bound me,
and not to set me free,
it dont mean to rule the streets,
but to build a safe field...


For me,
my freedom dont mean to disgide,
but work on me,
and on my passion for high lights,
it dont mean to fallow the black shadows,
but to grow and colour our own rose....


For me,
my freedom is not be fool anyone,
but to proud someone,
and to prove everyone,
that,
my freedom dont mean to rule the clouds,
but to land on a safe tree,
aside of all pain,
under a sky of proud,
for what i did, what i am.....

Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,757 Points Hazel Durham (7/6/2013 11:36:00 AM)

    Freedom is about the truth we find within ourselves! !
    I agree with Kanniappan if you put it in poetic form, you show great promise! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 218 Points David Wood (6/30/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    I agree with Kinniappan below. At the moment it is prose. Read other poets first and then write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,188 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (6/23/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    Dear Simran Arora,
    I read your topic 'Freedom' I understand your interest. But can you arrange the same in small lines and paragraphs? as follows:

    For me,
    my freedom is at the priority,
    combination of adjustment,
    and compromises in majority....

    For me,
    my freedom is my wisdom,
    And wants to raise me up from all critic,
    with a working mind, out of room.... (likewise) .

    Congratulations. (Report) Reply

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