Freedom V Control Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Freedom V Control

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Freedom tapered or banged into progress towards control,
the more we had of which
the less we had of
Freedom,

the more we thought we'd never have
Freedom again,

the more we sought control.

Tuesday, December 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

This poem provides rudimentary ideas about freedom and control... nicely expressed!

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Michael Walker 22 February 2020

I never seek control, especially control by media about topical issues like climate change. I am free to think for myself and I do that to the maximum, although my only outlet is writing an occasional letter to newspapers. This brilliant poem made me rethink the issues.

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Nice. This fits with a newish concept I am tossing around: The opposite of freedom is not control, it is wild. Its a mesh of things I've drawn from Joseph Campbell. In short, freedom is the coastal shores of a worthless life & hopeless existence. In practical terms, those who cling to 'it' the most, are the most deprived, rife with evil, & malicious minds ever made by human experience.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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