Khairul Ahsan

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French Kiss - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Many young lovers say,
Their first kiss went amiss,
Amid frenzied disarray.

Remember our one?
Neither deliberate nor abrupt,
And not just only for fun.

When words of mouth ran out
And love overflowed from eyes,
That moment just came about.

The embrace was emphatic
Lips got automatically locked,
The moment was so ecstatic!

We didn't know what a French Kiss was,
Yet we did just that without knowing,
Time stood still, as the smooching went abuzz.

Our tongues needed to be cased in a sheath,
Trying to get entwined, relentlessly,
Till we imprisoned them between our teeth.

It was then we opened our eyes,
Looked at each other, as if in a trance
Started all over again, with frenzied cries.

If this is what a French Kiss is,
We wish to be eternally French,
And thank the French for this.

Comments about French Kiss by Khairul Ahsan

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/22/2016 10:13:00 AM)

    @V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy,
    I am glad that you read this poem and made such a wonderful comment. Loved your thoughts and feelings, as well as the humor.
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  • (7/9/2016 3:58:00 AM)

    Vow a phd on French kiss, first kiss, kissy kiss, bliss of true love, unlock the soul and mind get the lip locked, it's different and romantic spontaneous kiss thanks for the share dear poet (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (6/26/2016 1:01:00 PM)

    @Rajnish Manga,
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment there. Much appreciate, dear poet.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/26/2016 9:27:00 AM)

    @Sandra Feldman,
    I appreciate very much your thoughtful comment on my poem. The words of praise and appreciation have inspired me a lot.
    Thank you so very much!
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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/26/2016 8:59:00 AM)

    @Edward, Kofi Louis,
    I am much inspired by your comment on my poem.
    Thank you.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/26/2016 8:45:00 AM)

    @Bernard Snyder,
    I am much inspired by your words of praise and appreciation. My heartfelt thanks for the kind words.
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  • Rajnish Manga (6/26/2016 12:04:00 AM)

    The embrace was emphatic
    Lips got automatically locked, .... A lovely act and emotion beautifully portrayed. Thanks.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/25/2016 11:57:00 PM)

    @Akachukwu Lekwauwa,
    I've been much inspired by your words of congratulations.
    Thank you for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. Enjoyed the humor in your comment.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/25/2016 11:09:00 PM)

    @Kim Barney,
    Thanks for reading my poem and congratulating me on its being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'.
    I am inspired by both, the poem's selection and your congratulations.
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  • (6/25/2016 5:46:00 PM)

    No prose could do as well.
    The intense power of feeling combines with language to make us feel and see at the same time.
    Quite an exceptional poem.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/25/2016 2:03:00 PM)

    The moment was so ecstatic! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (6/25/2016 1:01:00 PM)

    This is a very nice, warm, and lovely poem. Great writing style also. Congrats on having this poem chosen as 'poem of the day'. Well deserved! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (6/25/2016 1:00:00 PM)

    @ Anil, Kumar Panda
    Thank you very much for reading the poem and sharing your thoughts. I've been much inspired by your appreciative comment.
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  • Akachukwu Lekwauwa (6/25/2016 10:26:00 AM)

    wow! tis so good. congratulations.
    now I am reminded of my own first kiss,
    it was the sweetest, the loveliest and the longest I had; though it was nothing French. so I owe the French nothing
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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/25/2016 9:10:00 AM)

    @Sk Nurul Huda,
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment.
    I always try not only to acknowledge the readers' comments on my poem, but also to send a message to him/her acknowledging the comment. I believe, the readers who stops by to read my poem and make a comment, deserve this kind of acknowledgement from me. While doing so, I also try to read one or two of his/her poems too and make a comment of my own. This is my style, which I've been following ever since I entered PH.
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    B.m. Biswas B.m. Biswas (6/25/2016 2:34:00 PM)

    Thanks...... for unveiling even the attitude you maintain.

    B.m. Biswas B.m. Biswas (6/25/2016 2:30:00 PM)


  • Khairul Ahsan (6/25/2016 8:50:00 AM)

    @Ramesh T A,
    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem. The theme of the poem has been augmented by your considered thoughts.
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  • (6/25/2016 8:32:00 AM)

    Well done, Khairul. Congratulations for having it selected as member poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (6/25/2016 6:56:00 AM)

    very nice. The first kiss is spontaneous and full of love. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (6/25/2016 6:12:00 AM)

    First of all congratulations for member poet....

    : -) ...I you too refind and sobered to enjoy your kiss and make it a high eiphel rower which going to be a called a heritage tower of kiss in future......awesome.

    I would like to bid you a special thanks on behalf of the ph members for answering or giving feedback to almost all comments made bu us......

    @ have a smooth and happy PEN........

    ............................................ Nurul.
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  • Ramesh T A (6/25/2016 3:21:00 AM)

    First natural kiss between soulmates is voluntary and pure love nothing can forbid in the world. French kiss is direct outcome of hearts united into one based on love unique among humans! Nicely composed poem to read and enjoy! Congratulation! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, October 21, 2013

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