Friend Poem by Sathya Narayana
Friend
An old friend is like a golden trove.
Melt him, whenever thou felt so,
wear him; or even tear him! I vow,
never does he lose his glow!
Ever near to thou to distance every woe!
Call him a pal and clasp him in love
or cast him off in unmindful shove
he stays within thou as another soul.
Cloning bodies is a new found go
cloning minds friends knew long long ago!
I felt this was a nice piece as far as it went. I just felt there needed to be more for the reader to take in. GW62
wow a beautiful piece of write. I like the climax 'Cloning minds! Friends knew long long ago! ! ' Keep writing sathya and sharing with us + 10 to you.
I add good friends are like golden treasures... can't afford to lose them.. such good souls and know how to clone hearts.. very impressive..10 Rema
Never does he lose his glow----a friend is a friend, , no matter what, , Thanks
A very well written poem, I like the rythem and structure. Very good. Lynn
A truly good poem... Represents friendship... The greatest feel
Great experience, like Krishna-Sudama, congratulations for the sweet frendship comment.10+++
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thank you very much for the comment on my poem. i appreciate it very much. your poem is lovely. i enjoyed it. thanks. take care. :)