Friends Poem by Beach Girl

Friends

Rating: 4.2


My far flung friends
Like stars above
You sparkle through the night

Unreachable
Yet beautiful
You fill my heart with light

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is referring to all the wonderful friends I've made via the internet. You know who you are.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcus Mckinley 10 January 2014

a very calming succinct poem. i like it

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Savita Tyagi 14 January 2014

Lovely poem. In today's world far flung friends are closer. Beautiful analogy. Thanks for sharing.

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Cassandra Jasmine 16 January 2014

Beautiful! Despite it being short (I, really, don't have a high preference for long poems!) , it holds a lot of meaning. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 24 January 2014

Your poem, and the note, is very warm, just as the poet! Thank you.

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Goldheart Bird 10 February 2014

Very pretty, I get annoyed sometimes when there are long poems. Like Cassandra said, ''it holds a lot of meaning''. : D

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Sochukwu Ivye 20 October 2017

Elegant homage to unmet friends. Good and effective application of simile, metaphor, and apostrophe, etc. You've mastered the perfect art of saying much in little words. Much kudos, dear.

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2017

You know why stars are beautiful to your heart, because your heart like it glows and shine....honest heart deserves it :) This is such a beautiful and simple poem that require no expensive ink, but honest one...sparkling like the other ones!

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Shahin Latif 20 November 2015

Sweet poem. Thank you so much.

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Roseann Shawiak 01 September 2015

Like far-flung friends sparkling through the night, so is this gem of a poem to all who read it. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Lusciously sweet for your beautiful poem

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