Freespirit Juneja (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)
Friends (A tribute to my friends)
Amazing Earthly beings
No they are not divine
Vivify with Intensity
Flout the apathy
I understand your curiosity
End here this mystery
With Innovating new trends
I introduce you my wonderful friends
Love & only love their ardor
Hearts blend and beat louder
Togetherness is their denomination
Hatred dies of its own creation
At times parents, at times teachers
Imbibed with everyone's features
Enriched with verve, innovating new trends
Oh they are my wonderful friends
Enthusiasm beams with pride
Welcome sheer happiness,
Sadness no more its bride
Life wishes to be caressed
Wishes emerge from duress
Create heaven every moment
With their innovating trends
They are just my wonderful friends
Our deeds decide heaven or hell
Only foolish buy & swell
God created one for me
Nesting on the friendship tree
Pranks, teasers, slangs come free
Elation and alliance enrich its beauty
I can even give heaven a miss
To reside in my Friends' eternal bliss
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Wow! a beautiful tribute to your friends..love these lines.. :)
I can even give heaven a miss
To reside in my Friends' eternal bliss
..indeed they are wonderful friends...i love your writing style
thanx for sharing (:
Friends really are a gift of god..and u proved it.. :) nyc..
God created one for me, nesting on the friendship tree-this is such a beautiful line! The entire 3rd verse is so
Outstanding- Deserves 10,10- Constance Yost
Outstanding concept. Well penned.
At times parents, at times teachers
Imbibed with everyone's features
... well captured
Very nice poem.Its really a great honour for your friends to have such a nice friend. Good and enjoyable poem. I want to be your friend too.
And sharad one more thing.....
I thing you won't mind but there's a spelling mistake in the second line of the last paragraph,
'Only foolish buy it and sell', instead of swell, , i guess....
sorry if i got you wrong! ! ! !
forgive me for so much criticization......: (
It's an awesum attempt by you sharad but I think that somewhere your thoughts were lagging behind the vocabulary you used! ! ! ! !
May be I didn't understand it, the way you tried to explain, well that must be my fault! ! ! 1
Otherwise, thank you a lot to tell us our importance in your life...
I'm happy to have you as my friend and you deserve a special place, as you were the first one to comment upon my creations! ! ! ! ! :)
I enjoyed this poem. It has a different and unexpected take on what a friendship can offer.