! Friends In The Sky Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar
! Friends In The Sky
First shimmering light I arose
Seeing a bunch of lovely rose;
Sun smiling through the window
Over the trees dangling bough
Like a red rose in heavenly meadow;
Sun shining brightly in the sky;
Waking to remind me of my-
Memorable days passed by;
which had promised to come by
Whenever going went hay wire;
Waiting for them every day
Promising Sun came and went by
Celestial Moon waited in the sky
Along with Stars to smile
Whenever I was sad and shy;
Starting the day with a smile to spare
To my lovely friends in the sky,
In the eden of twinkling stars,
Who shall be with me whenever I cry
Who shall be with me whenever I cry
...A good poem indeed.Though simple in theme a poetic grace accompanies each line.I have enjoyed it and given a flat 10 as my vote tribute.. keep writing friend.
nothing comforts like nature.it has healing powers you just have to make a connection. i too have friends in the sky from whom i draw strength.
beautifull write........ uve expressed the feeling so easily..... its touching how v have frnds in the sky..... true....... cheers to u.......10/10..
sure sir....they were the ones who partied.......very well written sir........and thanks for taking time to read mine.iam grateful.......
the last two lines of your poems reminds robert frost's 'miles to go before i sleep, miles to go before i sleep' nice poem covering elements of the sky above
I like the way you remember your freinds in the sky as I often do with the stars. Your writing is easily understood by following the rhyme which I certainly find more enjoyable to read as well as write. well done 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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We enjoy the company of sun and moon, stars and birds!