Friends Will Last Long Poem by Princess Bernadette Anillo

Friends Will Last Long

Rating: 5.0


Seldom speaking, seldom smiling…
Always looking up in the ceiling…
Carrying the problems of their aching heart…
Because their minds are often apart…

I can do anything with my friend by my side…
Nevertheless, these people not seem to know what is right…
Infrequently smiling and talking to each other…
Because for them each never matters…

I devoted this poem to my friends at school,
Who treat each other as a fool…
Can somebody understand what is happening now?
Fighting is not funny neither cool…

Friends are our souvenirs…
That will remind us from where we had studied…
Friend last forever… Friends last-long…
I just want you two to get along…

Can you remember the days of your merriment?
When you two always have fun and excitement?
I think this could help you two to understand…
Your friends are always in your right hand…

Friend of mine are what I called “treasure”,
Relying their laughter in fun and leisure.
I now want you to apologize…
Because everyone is upset in your fight…

I always say to you what are friends for…
Relating to each other and loving you too…
But why are you acting like this?
Do you know what can be the outcome of this?

Too far to claim… To far to reach…
Making a friend would also make me rich…
Wealthy with care… Wealthy with smile…
Can you be like this in just only a while?


I consider talking as getting along…
But your attitude does not seems right…
After a minute there is always a fight…
For your patience is too small…

Please stop the teasing…
Please stop the joking…
Because the feelings inside me
Are also what you are way of thinking…

I know how to be teased
Because I have a familiarity…
Me being teased blamed and taunt…
But my patience for my friends still last long
Because I know….

FRIENDS LAST- FOREVER….
FRIENDS WILL LAST- LONG…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
jack russell 21 September 2006

There is a lot of truth in what you say...your friends would do well to listen :) I have read a few of your poems, and you show great promise. You are, however, falling into the 'trap' of rhyming for the sake of rhyme. This work would have been far superior as a piece of heartfelt prose...it would have meant more. Just write from the heart...if it rhyme it rhymes, if it doesn't, it doesn't! A good effort, and I wish you well in the future...keep writing :) Best wishes :) Jack.

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2006

True oh so true. Nicely written Patricia

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Princess Bernadette Anillo

Princess Bernadette Anillo

Brgy. Ambulong, Tanauan City Batangas
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