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Friendship or Love


When I talk to you it is friendship
But when I hug you it is love
Friendship is when we have fun
Love is when we flirt
So which do I choose the strong friendship
or
the fun love?

Submitted: Friday, May 25, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, March 02, 2011

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  • Rookie Emma_1221@list.ru Adamyan (4/12/2010 3:12:00 PM)

    in a fun love u can lose friend and never gain him again, but in strong friendship u can love ur friend without lossing not friendship nore love. sly? yeah :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sharayna Eldridge (4/1/2010 1:20:00 PM)

    I Really Love This Poem.. It Speaks The Truth 4 Every 1! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hunter Dasten (1/27/2010 10:30:00 PM)

    I've read a few of your poems, yet this it the one I choose to leave my thoughts on. I feel as if your work is simply scratching the surface of idea's you don't fully develop into a resolution. I implore you as a writer myself, to pursue your poems until they have a firm motive to exist! It is not enough to merely express an emotion, the poet must justify itself! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (8/10/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    you amuse me my dear.....I like the style and the concept utter,
    so sweet, harsh to believe, to near yet! so far and so flirting yet! its
    fancy....God bless your poem....A beautiful one...a 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 250 Points Kristen Brown (8/10/2009 8:37:00 PM)

    A little short, which is cool. Most poems I've read are a bit long.
    Definitely talking about a guy. Not so much a crush but a guy friend you've been friends with for awhile and are starting to develop feelings for.
    As for the question at the end, why not both? You need both love and fun in a relationship. I hope that helps
    If you'd be so kind would you look at my poems. 'I wish' and the 'special someone' poems. I'd be really grateful to have your input (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poetic Soul (7/25/2009 9:39:00 PM)

    A wonderful breif write...great words of wisdom and understanding. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alf Hutchison (7/24/2009 4:50:00 PM)

    Words of great wisdom... I do really like this write... when does friendship become love or better still when does love become friendship... regards Alf (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Dave Dunn, aka Rhumour (7/17/2009 7:35:00 PM)

    I found this to be the best of the several poems I read on your page tonight - it has a purpose and control that captures attention.

    Best wishes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Josh Blight (7/9/2009 4:02:00 PM)

    A very good poem. Short, sweet, and to the point. I think the best love developes from a great friendship. And you cant really have one without the other. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Smith (5/3/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    aren't friendship and love exactly the same thing or is there a big difference.....
    I do not know.............
    anyway liked the poem thanks xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/27/2009 10:15:00 PM)

    friendship and love go with each other..great emotions and thoughts..amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (12/27/2008 9:19:00 PM)

    i think that friendship is the one that lasts probably forever, while love comes an d goes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 174 Points Melvin Banggollay (9/1/2008 9:39:00 PM)

    Choose what's your heart beat. Love without a fire is not good, friendship without love is the same..... Take them booth and you will be happy.

    thanks and I can give you my love if you wish,
    melvin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (4/2/2008 4:06:00 PM)

    I'd like to hear the answer to that one.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Howard Johnson (3/10/2008 4:51:00 PM)

    nice thought and word flow, excellent work Shiny, (Report) Reply

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