Fay Slimm

Rookie - 17 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Fringes Of Hope. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Torn as it's edge is, I have sworn always
To apprehend hope. Glazed with eyes blinded
By hurt, hope only can bind up loose frays
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Comments about Fringes Of Hope. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (5/10/2009 12:20:00 AM)

    When all is lost and no one around
    your heartbeat, the only sound
    In the blackest hole the smallest light
    Hope! give's the strength to fight

    love the title! Fringes of Hope, (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 150 Points Muhammad Ali (5/8/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    Energizer.......! !
    precious poem dear Fay!
    10.. Ali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Juneil Sechico (5/2/2009 10:57:00 AM)

    nice one Fay! very fresh! 10 from me.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (4/30/2009 3:11:00 AM)

    Fay, Remarkable poem... Unfortunately, the hope not always is the reliable... But I'm no corrected optimist... 10...
    /Thank you.../
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (4/30/2009 2:38:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagery Fay...and an excellent poem...as always in your own inimitable style...Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Susan Jarvis (4/30/2009 1:57:00 AM)

    An excellent extended metaphor - love the fringes, frays and unravellings - and the message is spot on. S ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/30/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    this was well said.. as expected from Fay. (Report) Reply








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