From Where I Sit Poem by Not Long Left

From Where I Sit

Rating: 5.0


Through eighteen glass sqaures
lined with lead-
The outside world
A spiders view.
Half a window here,
another half there,
Top side of porch,
and a section of bare wall.
Behind the faces,
those stone shaped faces,
all is not what it seems.
Hidden from view,
a sometime shadow,
a movement of curtain,
a scream at 2am.
Death of the neigbour,
it's all too quiet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 07 May 2006

Much talent, enjoyed the flow and felt myself placed in medieval times, a stately manner Full of intrigue and atmosphere Love Duncan

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Julia Klimenova 07 May 2006

I love the mounting tension in this poem. The silence grows until it becomes unbearable and bursts. There is always a sense of danger when everything is too quiet in our concrete jungle.

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