Frozen In Time Poem by Rebekah Rogers

Frozen In Time

Rating: 5.0


silenced in my sorrow
paralyzed in pain
rentless with reality
guilty with no gain

wanting without will
calling with no claim
faces start to blur
but yours remains the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 August 2011

Rebekah, I would call this powerful and thought provoking short poem 'FROZEN IN TIME' We all feel like this one time or another in our lives but we still survive and live long enough to tell! Once you successfully bury your past and slowly move through a long or short path carrying on a bag containing your heart, love and hope! Then you will find the light at the end of the tunnel and the strength to move on! Great work! Keep inspiring the World with your great talented writes! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Fadwa Gmiden 22 November 2010

i loved it's really untitled it's great i love it '' wanting without will calling with no claim'' awesome

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