Frozen Moments Poem by Rini Shibu

Frozen Moments

Rating: 4.2


You came into my life
When I was down with endless strife
Gave life to my soul
And played music to make me whole
You are a part of me now
My dream and desire now
You are the flakes of my frozen moments
The most precious component

Sunday, February 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 February 2020

VERY NICE SENTIMENTS HOPE HE READS THEM

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Magadha Rani 09 February 2020

A beautiful poem dear poetess! Well composed. (Poetess Magadha)

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Belle Wassermeister 20 September 2020

Very nice, Rini! I love the line " gave life to my soul" . Thanks for posting.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 August 2020

flakes of frozen moments. good concept

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'You are a part of me now My dream and desire now 'Emotional flow in the poem is like a stream...10

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 February 2020

'You are the flakes of my frozen moments The most precious component'.. is such beautiful lines. Loved the way you have expressed your love.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2020

A wonderful poem that expresses lovely feelings. Well crafted and conveyed.

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