Fruitfulpiece Of Love Poem by barnabas michael barde

Fruitfulpiece Of Love

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Gracefully from the garden
Of ecstasy in divine,
I plug't
Love
From the fruitful stem
Of God.

It test caring
and i share
With you...

Its the word
Of the greatest one
Of the high golden city
Supreme in splendours
Full of love to brim...

With heartfulness...
I pray this word's
portion
Be plant richly
In the precious piece
Of your gracious
Soul...

Thursday, March 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Romantic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I write to the pleasure of gracefulness to all, and to edify, to all hearts
In heart to heart romanticaly pure.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

Love is everytging in life! ! So, let us love all mankind and, live in peace. Nice work.

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I love it, man. Keep doin' ya thing.

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Kody Pound 28 March 2014

Nicely said! I love the way the poem speaks of heaven. To help improve your work you should use more detail to paint a better picture in the readers mind. More detail in the writing, the more unique your poems will become giving the readers a greater experience. Keep up the good work!

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Sallam Yassin 28 March 2014

sweeeet in one word your fruit In His Love

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