Fruitless Try Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Fruitless Try



So many girls broke my heart into pieces
Yet I am yearning for love and sweet kisses.

So many times I thought I would rather die
Than going for relentless but fruitless try.

So many sad memories now haunt my brain
Like ghosts who can scare me again and again.

So many mistakes that I made in the past
Are still affecting my life like iron’s rust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Phan 29 September 2011

So sad and painful poem I ever read. Fanastic job and interesting poem you wrote.

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 September 2011

Interesting write..convincing as if its really happening i love the meaning and the rhyme...

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

Interesting write with alliteration of words and repetition of the word...So with conflicting and contradictory traverses of the mind...emotional catharsis and is well achieved through words here..

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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