Full Mark Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Full Mark



Many faces leave impression behind
So nice and look very kind
They have inbuilt smile
That makes you think meanwhile

"You look so impressive" I opened conversation
By pointing out first question
It was really first ever
She was not seen this before

You can read in her eyes
I peeped through and tried
To reason out her smile
I thought it is her innocent style

Hr lips are controlled
Not more or less opened
It gets adoration on face
She has lovely traces

"Not many may be gifted" I thought
She sands firm and not shifted
I reminded her about natural beauty
She was all praise for almighty

She has inkling
About literature and liking too
I gave her full mark
For opening good talk

Saturday, September 27, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2014

Powerful and thought provoking. I love it. But I think you have a typo in the fouth stanza. I think you mean to say 'Her' instead of 'Hr'. Nice piece. 27 Sep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 September 2014

Many faces leave impression behind So nice and look very kind

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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